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The palace of pressure (my first Story)

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FOREWORD: I know what many people of you are thinking: Oh a story, how boring, how could a story, words, could
         amuse me? Thats exactly how i thought when i just searched for some art here over two years! I couldnt
         imagine how words could make me having the same feelings i had when i watched some art... i never thought
         that words also can be so smexy, so intensive, in fact they are creating a whole fantasy in your mind
         for which you dont need anthing more then yor imagination. A story not just simply creates one immage,
         it creates a whole film, with characters who have a ful personality, with simply much more life in it then
         a simple picture. it can be so much more amusing when you have ful personality with their own thought and
         their own soul then a picture in which you can just imagine how a character could be.

                 the best thing you could do is to give it a try and jumping right into my head!
                             

                    This is a flattening-fetish related story, just to mention it!
                        I used different quotation-marks for every character!

               
            I also have to note that this is my first story! I cant wait for your critique and comments!
            I tried my best to use a right and readable grammar the whole time so please tell me if i did
            alot of mistakes!
           
                                                 And now enjoy!!


                                            The Palace of Pressure


Were has he been? his eyes were covered with a strange darkness and the air was filled with a depressing mugginess
so that he wished he wouldnt find it out anyway...
trying to gather his senses and remembering what happened he was interupted by a stabbing pain on his forehead:

"Owww my head is pulsing... what... arrrgh... this pain... what happened..?"

As he tried to put his hands on his head they where blocked by a massive piece of metal!
Wondering about that he tried to move his foots and yes it revealed that they were cought aswell...
suddely he noticed that was was lieing on a kind of a table caught on it with his arms and legs!

*Oh no what... where am i... what is that?? what game do you play with me!?*

Slowly lapsing into panic he winced when he heard sudden yellings combined with a deep noise of pleasure coming from
a room behind him, or at least he thought that there was another room...

*Where the hell am i!? HEY DO YOU HEAR ME?? COME OUT AND DONT PLAY YOUR GAMES!!*

Falling into a rage combined with panic he became much calmer when he heard a few steps who became louder and louder
until he noticed that someone stood next to him...

*Who the hell are you, you freak!? get me off of this thing and turn the lights on dude!*

°Nah nah nah, so much hate, i dont like that. but i will grant you your last wish and put this bothersome blindfold
off of your tiny head°

removing the blindfold, he was faced with his deep feeling of panic again as he moved his eyes through the room
on which´s table he was cought on. the room was covered with rusty plates of metal which vibrated when he heard some
sudden yellings again.

*Where am I you demon? Am i in the storehouse of the devil himself!?*

°Ha ha ha you are such a cute and funny little fellow! Let me welcome you in my palace of ... speaking... or...
pressure as my guests would call it°

*Speaking, pressure! what are you talking you derp? and why am i cought on that rock?*

°Oh this fire... this strenght... it will be such a wonderful time to get on the things ... I want! Well and the
massive piece of rock will prevent the table of breaking if you wont cooperate... BUT no worries! i´ll have my fun
in any way with you my little fighter°

*Cooperate? with you?? i dont even know what you want or who you are... wait a second.... you are the guy who
commanded one of his scutchers to hit me!! who do you think you are!? are you crazy?? ha ha ha and you lanky guy
want to break this table?? how will YOU face me? you need to tie me on this table so it is fair mh? I see! how
strong I am indeed!*

°No, this table is for preventing you to run away from HIM!°

*Him?? Him you? hahahaha dont make me laugh!*

Another yell which slowly moved into a groaning is heard from the same room like before...

°I think he just finished this guy before, what a poor creature... didnt want to cooperate even when he was one
with the table°

"BOSS!! what shall i do with this paper here?" - is heard from the other room.

°Just leave him, I need a new carpet for my room so we´ll care about him later! now cmon over here, we have a new
guest who wants to get to know you!°

"Me like guests" - is heard from the other room.

*So you command your guys again to do the dirty job for you mh?*

°Me? Oh noes, excuse me, I just prevent him to break you... if he welcomes our new guests he fully falls into love
with them showing you how much he likes them... our guests look a bit... deflated ... after this attack of love!°

*You wanna scare me now?! You... cant... scare ... me... do you hear me?!* (*gulp* what am i saying) *sweating*

°*smirks* Scare? We want to show you how much we like you, because I do like you.. and i would be pleased if you
would share some... secrets... with me... *wink*°

A rumbling noise is heard from the door-sill becoming louder and louder as the ground starts shaking with the rusty
metal plates yawning under the weight.

"So who´s the new guest boss? *stares at the table* I´ll give him a warm welcome *breaks his knuckles*"

while the noises of the stomping steps became louder with every step he did towards his table he asked himself
what hell of a creature can make the earth crackling under it´s weight with such an intensity. when the earth
stopped shaking him like pudding he was able to have a look on the guy who made the other creature yell frequently
and heard on the guy who commanded him.
A slow feeling of panic rose again inside of his body.

* *gulp* So you .... you are the neat guy who... wanna welcome me ... *gulp* nice to meat you hehe ...*sweating* *

The massive creature infront of him appeared to be a well formed and slightly overweighted aligator who´s massive
body was covered by multiple leather-bands leading over his breast and over his shoulder which showed some well
trained and muscular arms increasing its impression by wearing some spiked bracelets. He weared some impressive
leathern trousers sticking to his body by wearing a studded belt.
Trying to catch a look at him it appeared that he weared a black mask on his strong eyes which seemed to be
uneffected by anything or anyone. His whole face seemed to be carved in stone as he looked at him, lieing helplessly
on his back unable to move trying to hide his fear.
The whole impression of him reached it´s final intensity when his eyes walked over his nose on which he weared a
nosering and the tattoo on his stomach which appeared to look a bit like a .... flat... lizard...

°that was one of our first guests if you are wondering about his little tattoo here. the tiny creature completely
disappeared under him and we never made it to scratch him off... well at least it seems to make him proud... so it
still has it´s usage°

"tiny creature now knows who´s the bigger reptile!" *stares at him on his table with a small grin on his face*

*hehe yes... you seem to be a big and .... comfortable guy... hehe *gulp* *

°Now then! Lets have a neat talk now! *rubs his belly* you know something... something you maybe wanna share with
us? come on you are such a nice little fellow, i dont want to force you to tell me that!°

* Know something? what do you mean you fre... *stares at the gator* I mean... would you be so kind and go more into
details? *sweating* *

°mhh you sure are very directly are you? well you know the combination of the tresor which was in your room... i
was so kind and brought it here so we can open it... together... i think its just fair if we... share the things
inside isnt it?°

*You.. you want my code?? I´ll.. *stares at the gator* *gasps* I never ever tell you that! you are nothing more
then a avaricious monster!! *gasps* *

°na na na not so rude... even if i like the fire rising in your body... you will make it longer then our other
guests... they havent stayed for a long time... in fact they partly diesapeared from one second to another... I
wonder why...°

"can i boss?"

°yes .. be so gentle and show him the love we are willing to give him and how trustful we are...°

Beeing very happy about that a small but growing grin walked over the gator´s face while he started to break his
knuckles again followed by rubbing his belly and staring at him.

* *gulp* yes ... yes be so... gentle... to me... be neat! *his face slowly showed the rising fear in his eyes
as he was confronted frequently with the fact that he was tied to the table and unable to move* *

*we... we can be friends...we...*

Completely unaffected by anything he said the gator slowly leaned over the table with him cought to it slowly
resting the massive bulk of his belly on him pressing him slightly to the table. Now he was face to face with
the gator as he still stared on his helpless victim now caught between him and the table making a nice
sandwich out of him. His face hasnt changed as he looked in his eyes again, it was still this rock-solid
look on his face which made him getting terrified even more, also knowing that he enjoyed anything he did
as his face also showed a deep pleasure for anything what follows now...
not knowing what happens now he could slightly imagine it when the gator grabbed both edges of the rock-table
with his hands and foots preparing himself for the next step...

°awwww...well isnt that cute?... he found a friend in you!... just like you wanted!...you see?... theres nothing
to worry about! we are all your friends!... and what makes a friend beeing a good friend?... yes! of course!
trust!... you can trust me, you can talk with me about everything you want! good friends share allmost anything
with each other... like the things inside a tresor...isnt shared joy the better joy?... yes it is mhh? *pats
his head* ... so now that we all love each other *leans against the gator* ... lets have a look inside your little
treasure here... *smirks* you dont have to hide your secrets from me! you can trust me! *winks*°

* *sweating* N...no! you...you cant force me! *breathing* you cant fool me! there are things inside there which
belongs to ... ME!!... *trying vainly to avoid the massive pressure which the gator put on him* *

°owwww *sadface* that´s too bad... you still dont like us... isnt that sad my big buddy? *pats the gators belly*...
Ahh! I know! let´s show him the true meaning of our love... let´s ... let´s squash him with our love!... *pats
the gator´s butt* it´s all up to you big fellow... show him our true love!°

The gator, still staring on his victim, slowly came nearer and nearer to him, using more and more of the strengt of
his muscular arms and legs pressing him even harder between him and the table but then suddely stopped crushing
him out and keeping his position...
As he faced the gator again there still was this face which didnt moved a centimeter but still... he felt the
inreasing joy of the gator as he seemed to do the thing he does best and he loved most...
His body, now half pressed, made an impressive expression on his face which totally showed the crushing weight
of this unmoveable creature!

°The code.... friend...°

*...no!...*

°more love buddy°

While the gator continued making mush out of him his eyes suddenly bulged slightly as a result of the unstoppable
weight which crushed him with an increasing intensity!
Now even the metal plates tieing him on the table started yawning and bending as the gator slowly came nearer and
nearer like the crushing walls of a garbage press, with him as the garbage!
Now he wasnt even able to have a look on that rocksolid face again because his eyes bulged more and more... but he
knew that that face havent changed yet...
His body slowly felt like becoming one with the massive bulk of the gator as it got stretched more and more into the
size of the gator´s big stomach which sticked to him like chewing gum!
the gator stopped again once...

°that is your last chance my friend... if you wont share your secrets with us we have the need to leave a massive
impression on you with our love!°

Taking a last breath, which was very difficult according to the pressure, he spoke the last word which should have
made his destiny:

*..ne...ver...*

°awww... i think we need to put the whole intensity of our love on him *leans agains the gator* now... *pats and
rubs the gators butt* now my big fellow... have fun with him...*smirks*°

Suddely the gators face showed a big grin and he giggled with a deep, vibrating noise making sure that his attitude
changed with the last words of his boss. instead of crushing his victim again he rosed his body instead so that he
was able to look on his face again.

"now you gonna be my next tattoo when i have finished having my fun with you. I am so gonna show you how cruely
i can crush you between me and that table hurhurhur! i am glad you refused to tell him the code... now i´ll have my
fun with you... prepare of getting pulverised and get to know what it means to be crushed in the most cruel way
hurhurhur!!"

without beeing able to make one thought, the gator slamed on the table and started rubbing him between his belly and
the table, moaning in joy as he pressed him to his new tattoo. while he continued slaming and rubbing him on the
table with all of his strenght his voice was heard through every hall and room of the building as he continued
moaning to the terribly loud sounds of crushing which made the halls rumbling frequently...

°too bad, another broken person... i think i should change my tactics mhhh...°
So, I decided to reupload a story I deleted here as part of my kind-of ressurection.
Back then I was having so much fun writing this one as my first story I ever shared with likeminded people.
I hope you can still have fun reading it and find something enjoyable in it!
I didnt change something, so its the original.
© 2015 - 2024 McTobi
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bogm0nst3r's avatar
I remember this story! I loved it!